Pet+Dragon+Writing

I need a pet dragon We have been focusing on persuasive writing in Week 5. We have become very convincing in our writing, it is tricky to do. How can you say no to these great arguments?

I need a pet dragon because it could clean the house, do the dishes, fly us to school, do breakfast, light the heater when it is winter, it can play picnic with us and play with us. Please, Mum? Poppy

I need a pet dragon because I would ride it. Then I won’t go in the car to school I would ride my dragon to school. We won’t have to spend money because you don’t need petrol. Please? Cooper

I need a pet dragon because it could warm my house up. Pretty please Mum, can I have a dragon? Then I can ride my dragon to school. Kobe

I need a pet dragon because it can cook the tea with her fire and she can light the candles on my birthday cake. Please? Joseph

I need a pet dragon because it can light my fire and it can fly me to the Warehouse, please Mum? Ariana

I need a pet dragon because if I have one I will have fun with it and it can cook dinner. Please Mum? Campbell

I need a pet dragon because you don’t have to pay money for a car, you can just fly to school. Please Mum and Dad please, please. You don’t have to pay money for petrol for the car either. It can make breakfast and dinner and lunch.If a robber comes the dragon can just blow his fire out of his mouth. If it is cold the dragon can just blow fire out of his mouth. If it is too warm the dragon can just use his tail to make be cold. Please Mum? Maddie P

I need a pet dragon because he will help. The dragon will be cool. Please Mum? Dragons are cool. Marcus

I need a pet dragon because I can stop the burglars from coming to our house to steal our money. It can fly to school and you won’t have to pay money for petrol. Everywhere we go we won’t need to pay money. I really, really want a dragon. Please can I have a dragon? If I don’t have a dragon I will not go top school anymore. Please, please can I have a dragon? Holly

I need a dragon because I am so, so, so good at my maths. I really, really am! Just give it to me, I need a dragon. If you don’t give me a dragon I will stay in my room and cry and cry and cry and never go back to school. Tj

I need a pet dragon because it can take me to school and it can light up the fire for us. It can make breakfast for us too. I need a dragon. Please, please, please get me a dragon. It can even scare away cats and dogs too. Tessa

I need a pet dragon because I could go to school on it and you would be able to save your money. It could light the fire in our house too. If robbers came the dragon could burn them. Please give me a pet dragon. Alice

I need a pet dragon because they are very good at jobs! You will waste your money on petrol, I could go on the dragon instead. Mum, you could stay home and I could have a very fun ride, please? Victoria

I need a pet dragon because he will help me burn the fire. Please can I have a dragon. I want him for my friend. I will love him. Please Mum and Dad? Rylee

I need a dragon because it will breathe fire at the robbers. The robbers will run away. My dragon will be great at breathing fire and it could help us roast marshmallows. Will the robbers come back to my house? Nope! We need a dragon. Ben